Nicely done
Well... There are still few FF VI animators left. :D
I really like the way how you do camera movement. The 3D illusion is a great aspect you have created.
Given the fatc that the material you're using to write the story is quite limited, you have managed to engage quite a complicated and rich story. I'd like to encourage you to continue the series. I myself had to make five movies before I got any award, so don't give up ^^. Large part of my motivation comes from the reviews anyway :). Also excellent custom sprites!
Don't worry about the grammar too much. I too lack the ability to write authentic english. I didn't notice any mistakes but I guess that's logical since my english isn't perfect either :P
Good job to both of you.